daffodil haiku

By Erin Bow on May 11, 2005 10:06 AM | 3 Comments

ducklings --
     smaller than
the daffodils


....


in a bank of daffodils
        one
     red tulip

....

forsythia
    dandelions
        daffodils



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3 Comments

DrMeglet | May 11, 2005 12:43 PM

I really like the middle one, it evokes a strong image, and I like the flow.

Laura Ragsdale | May 11, 2005 2:07 PM

I liked this! I can see it quite clearly

Brianna | May 31, 2005 3:33 PM

Paging Erin - are you out there, Erin? I miss your weblog.

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