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laterns
hung in black branches:
winter apples

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Or possibly

lanterns hung
in black branches:
winter apples

Getting stuck for hours over a linebreak is a poet's pitfall. I think it's probably even more pointless than usual when it comes to haiku.

Nice.
But how about "lanterns"?

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