the Lord shall come down
like rain on the grass
like rain before mowing
the Lord shall come down
The Lord falls alike
on the wheat and the thistle
his scythe takes alike
the grain and the weeds
The Lord comes in August
while hay is still sweetening
a sweetness of rot
from the wet windrowed fields
The Lord comes to me
like the dew in the morning
my heart is soaked through --
I am done with this singing

This is my favorite of the attempts. Love it.
"Windrowed" is a new word to me! Yay!