how long, oh Lord
(seizure during mass)

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winter noon
brilliance without warmth

cold on a cavity or a shot
     of whiskey -- how empty
     this pain, how long
     oh
Lord
     this gut-shot cold

the last candle lit
   advent and the congregation sings

     rejoice

no praise
   in my mouth

(a rough noise & people turning)

I am thinned like terebinth
     tear
          like paper


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Psalm 6
Isaiah 6

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I am instantly 'there'.

I am glad the blog is back. Been emailing as well. God bless. Write.

thrive!,
O

There?

I had more or less decided to discard this as nothing but self-pity. Which is legit as an emotion, but makes for a bad poem.

On reading it again I think it could be cut back and might be salvagable.

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